Intro, but hardly
Really, I'm not that interested in the rest. It started with such potential, but when the sound cut out and we're left with a fuzzy screen and nothing else, I was off. Don't introduce a song without at least involving it. Dropping a song mid-phrase is a big no no. And the inro of the characters? ooooo, you show a gorey pic, I'm sooo interested now. It's a much better idea to keep things in YOUR style. We don't care about pics and shocks. We want to see what YOU can do. Show us YOUR style as best you can. We'll much appreciate any effort you put into your toon. We want to see your style and your taste, not some shock pics and some freak tactics. A good start, but just keep to yourself and don't try to impress us with gore.